Fixing the hole

by Cherise   Mar 12, 2007


The hours are moving into some other time.
And I'm still trying to figure out
what is hers and what is mine.
I have to move on,I can't cry anymore.
I need to let this story unfold.
I have to pick of the pieces
And start fixing the hole.

As you may have already known before
I'm still not forgetting,
and my head is still sore.
but I know my tears can no longer take me anywhere,
though my heart is still broken
and my head isn't there.
Time to start traveling on now
Time to let this story unfold
I have to pick up the pieces
And start fixing the hole.

Now that I'm not completely lost anymore
and you now know that you hurt me
and I have lost all your trust.
We can't expect to move on with these basic facts
Got to start from ground zero
and start building it back
Got to let the story unfold
I have to pick up the pieces
And start fixing the hole.

But I still got a lot of questions left in my mind.
Is she still in your life?
Do you still talk to her all the time?
It would hurt me again greatly,
if she's still in your life.
Then what?
No pieces will be picked up
because nothing will be broken.
and no holes will need fixing
because one won't be dug.
everything will be lost,
with just one little tug.

The hours are moving into some other time.
And I'm still trying to figure out
what is hers and what is mine.
I have to move on,I can't cry anymore.
I need to let this story unfold.
I have to pick of the pieces
And start fixing the hole.

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  • 17 years ago

    by David

    Well i will vote too. a 5. i loved this poem. it was really well written.

    5/5 David

  • 17 years ago

    by Nessa

    IT WAS REALLY GOOD I CAN REALLY UNDERSTAND WHAT YOU ARE GOING THOUGH.
    I CAN RELATE TO IT

  • 17 years ago

    by Tainted Beauty

    WOW! This blew me away, I absolutely loved it. Its very heartfelt and it showed your emotions well, you're definitely taking this a lot better than some people would. I'm so happy that you and Wayne are going to give it another shot and "starting to fix the hole". :)

    Anyway, i loved this, especially the last few lines of every stanza, but I think the second to last stanza is kind of awkward and wordy, maybe just because it ends differently than the rest. Hmm anyway, good work.

    I LOVE YOU DARLING!

    --steph

  • I liked this poem. The flow was excellent. And it was well written.
    Good job 5/5