I liked this poem. The flow was excellent. And it was well written.
Good job 5/5

WOW! This blew me away, I absolutely loved it. Its very heartfelt and it showed your emotions well, you're definitely taking this a lot better than some people would. I'm so happy that you and Wayne are going to give it another shot and "starting to fix the hole". :)

Anyway, i loved this, especially the last few lines of every stanza, but I think the second to last stanza is kind of awkward and wordy, maybe just because it ends differently than the rest. Hmm anyway, good work.

I LOVE YOU DARLING!

--steph

IT WAS REALLY GOOD I CAN REALLY UNDERSTAND WHAT YOU ARE GOING THOUGH.
I CAN RELATE TO IT

Well i will vote too. a 5. i loved this poem. it was really well written.

5/5 David