by Unrequited
Wow, this is just wonderful! I can picture you in them now! ;) This was just amazing! The rhymes were flawless, and every line made me smile more than the last! |
This is cool-I can relate, as I grew up when the ripped jeans style was first 'in'. Actually, we had ripped in faded jeans before, but we weren't stylish-just poor, LOL! Actually we were ahead of our time, just as we wore flannel overshirts before grunge hit. Anyway, this is a unique, amusing and oddly touching ode to something beloved. Excellent piece, Wolfy. |
by amie
Haha joker good poem, nice to read one thats funny lol keep up your jolyness luv amie xx |
by keyla
Pretty cool poem! |
by xkRiSsIex
Haha i really like this one! made me smile and laugh! thanks for lightening my mood!! |
by xkRiSsIex
Haha i really like this one! made me smile and laugh! thanks for lightening my mood!! |
I luv yer jeans... hehe... lol :P jk. i've got my own... although, they might get jealous O_O. my jeans have been through a lot... camping, going overseas, school.... i luff my jeans too!!! although i am NOT a size 3. lol. man.... jeans deserve to be worn all the time!! |
by Unrequited
This poem deserves a MUCH better rating than what it has right now... this is too clever and the rhymes are too perfect to get anything less than a 5. |
by Silent Words
Its ok if your poem is somewhat silly, we need our imaginative side just as much as are realistic side, write what ever you feel like, I am sure it will end in a wonderful poem either way. |
Nice poem but i think its time to through them away......................................................................................................................5/5 |
by *~CaSsYa~*
Haha! one of my jeans has a hole on my butt and my knees and the zippers broken- LOL silly me but it just has so much memories u kno i think we all have one of those jeans/sweatshirt/jacket/etc yupyup its so geniuenly sweet! |
by 2uh
Hey. cute poem too. im just commenting back to say thanks for ur comment. |
That was actually really good...lol i have a funny poem called Mr. Shamful Bob I think you'd enjoy it, and i absolutly love your style. |
by Daniel mac
Awesome poem mate! |