Very good well wrote and i liked it

This poem is amazing i absolutly loved it. truely. 5/5 i loved how one stanza was long verses, then the next short then long again, good effect. keep up the good work!!!

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I think the strucure of this poem was really powerful and effective. you used good words and had a fluency about your work. it was an original poem, i havent really read much like this, i liked it a lot.

I just had to add more to my comment lol, i just felt this poem was so new and beautifully described. i love poems that seem to have a deepness behind them, like things only the poet will have known happened. keep this up please.xx

Sean my god man I'm glad I came back here to read this! Best poem I've read in ages, you know i love your work but WOW!