by Jenni Marie Mar 12, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
Last night I stood at my window |
by Kurt
A little short, but still good. I liked how each line trasitioned into the next. I do have a suggestion. You seem to have a pet word, that you like to use a lot and possibly find something else instead of "baby". You use it creatively and it enhances the poem it just seems repetitive at times. Anyway, 5/5 great poem. |