Comments : Forever In Your Arms Is Where I'd Lay

  • 17 years ago

    by Kurt

    A little short, but still good. I liked how each line trasitioned into the next. I do have a suggestion. You seem to have a pet word, that you like to use a lot and possibly find something else instead of "baby". You use it creatively and it enhances the poem it just seems repetitive at times. Anyway, 5/5 great poem.