Wow i really like this. I love the imagery it gives off! Excellent!

I really liked the repition of "Let the..." then how you go on to explain why. it has a great effect created. The imagery created is really good, i thought you should of split itup into 2 line stanzas. i just think that it would of made the effect more clear. I liked the rhyme youve used. And it has a nice rhythem. ANywyas a very enjpyable read. Keep up the great work! xx

I loved it with a capital LOVE!! you have such a great critique on life! the way you put your poems stun me! i get absorbed in your poems!!

xoxo Lucy!

Oh, i lik it gotta nice flow 2 it!!!

Oh I wish it would've kept going it had such nice imagery and detail it left me wanting more nice job 4/5

This poem isnt as good as your others. i gave it a 3. but you are still a really good writer!

I really like this one. i like how it flowed perfectly and rhymed as well. great job. i can relate to it in a way. and thank you for the comments

Ooh i like it!!! its good!!! ill give ya a 5/5!! great job!!!! check out my poem: We Shared A Few Laughs.
I think ull like it!
this poem will go in my favs!!!
~*~Skye~*~