Very interesting poem. Good work.

...I don't know what to say...It's not one of the best or one of the strongest I've seen. I do like the subject though because it is different. But it's a bit weak in the beginning. I find the third stanza the one that stands out. Diction wasn't great but it does give it something. Overall it's good but not the best. It's definitely word choice that kinda puts this down in my opinion.
~Faith-less