by Brenden Mar 12, 2007
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
I go about my day, as if nothing is wrong. If you were to ask me, I would say it's alright. But on the inside, I'm living in Hell. |
by purplified
A very sad but great poem....nice piece of work...keep it up :) |
by Temptation
Hey, this is a tragically beautiful piece! I hope I can help you, get in contact! 5/5 |
by ilana
Ur heart is open and there r lots of faiht in u -it will help u to make threw this period . wish u stuff would have been different for u ..but i guess life isn't as u wish -not fier.... |
by silence
Wow oddly enough I love this poem. I love dark poems but I think this is one of my favorites. I'm sorry you feel that way and I would be lying if i said I know exactly how you feel because no one knows how you feel but you but i know how my version of it feels :) keep writing. you are an excellent poet. I can't wait to read more from you 5/5 |