My Little Krisye

Great job, i really enjoyed the style you used in this poem, very vivid without too much description. Best Wishes -unattractive1

Ohhh.... this is so sad...Im sorry for your loss...I loved this poem though! the whole body part thing was cool... and I loved the way you used your words... nice job!

The one word that you use every second line were great. just read them alone. eyes, hands, voice, smile, words, years, heart. well done. i liked this the most. the one word lines. brought out a deeper meaning.

5/5 David

I absolutely loved your rythm and structure. I think the way you formatted the piece added a great effect and impact on the reader, and I especially loved the lines,
"Eyes
Scarred with pain.
Hands
Weathered by war"

I also loved lines 18-20, I really liked the contrasting descriptions and painful images. Again, the way you structure the poem creates a sense of shock and despair, I think you used that perfectly. Excellent read

Very deep, I just wished it had a little more flow, but I loved it, I could see it was a very emotional writeing good work