Wow thia poem was great, it had a lot of emotion and was very well written great job 5/5

Wow, this was great. It flowed really well & I loved the way it was put. Like: You put the word, and then described it.. That was very unique & creative. It really made the poem work. It had a lot of depth & emotion in it. Very sad. But wonderful.

Beautifully penned, hun.

Bri [x]

Very deep, I just wished it had a little more flow, but I loved it, I could see it was a very emotional writeing good work

I absolutely loved your rythm and structure. I think the way you formatted the piece added a great effect and impact on the reader, and I especially loved the lines,
"Eyes
Scarred with pain.
Hands
Weathered by war"

I also loved lines 18-20, I really liked the contrasting descriptions and painful images. Again, the way you structure the poem creates a sense of shock and despair, I think you used that perfectly. Excellent read

The one word that you use every second line were great. just read them alone. eyes, hands, voice, smile, words, years, heart. well done. i liked this the most. the one word lines. brought out a deeper meaning.

5/5 David

Ohhh.... this is so sad...Im sorry for your loss...I loved this poem though! the whole body part thing was cool... and I loved the way you used your words... nice job!

Great job, i really enjoyed the style you used in this poem, very vivid without too much description. Best Wishes -unattractive1