by Once an Angel Mar 12, 2007
category :
Life, society /
other
Note: I know there are not any apostrophes in this piece and there should be. I promise you that at one point they were there, but because of the tempormental editing program here, I had to take them out it order to post this. Sorry for all those who are bothered by bad gammar. |
by Rolo
Wonderful inspiration. I feel this gives the meaning to poetry...your feelings were expressed thoroughly as a flashback. I enjoyed it. |
by Angie
A beautiful fantasy filled with such descriptive imagery. I truly love this piece and your use of the words that were given to be used in this challenge was splendid. Well done Miko...... |
by ThugPoet
Thats was a really rich peice. A poem that takes the reader on a flashback journey through a typical childhood. Very well written indeed. Keep it up. |