Wow i totally have the same problem with this girl i love. she says she does today but not toworrow

That is really good i like it! Keep it up! 5/5

Beautiful work.....so well penned..kp up the good work!..5/5!..kudos!
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Very good...so much emotion put into the poem....i loved it

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thanks for the honest comment on my poem. i'm not exactly happy with the flow of my poem either...it's something i'm trying to fix. thanks again. =D

I really like this one, you put a lot of raw emotion in there. 5/5

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You can really open up and tell us how you really feel. i like that in poems. good job

You honestly do write beautiful sad poems. I found this one to have great emotion put into it. The whole piece was deep and heartfelt. Your poems take me away. I did not get bored once throughout this. Well done on writing an amazing poem. Loved it very much 5/5~mel

I like this one it was deep