Forever gone

by xo kisses xo   Mar 13, 2007


**hey everyone...i know that this is long but its really good. please comment and i will comment you back! sry if the ending isn't really good...i have to go to bed so i will fix it tomorrow after school**

She loved him so much
He was her world
Shes known him for years
But never been his girl

She wished on a star
For him every night
That maybe one day
He'd hold her tight.

She's hugged him berfoe
And he'd held her hand
But they're just friends
and she doesn't understand.

One day he told her
"i have a girlfriend!"
she said, "good for you!"
then sadly grinned.

she couldn't believe it
her heart ripped apart
that girl had her world
and now had his heart.

she longed for his love
but her heart was returned
now he was with her
and her heart was being burned.

she couldn't take it
she turned to walk away
he said, "whats wrong?"
she said,"I'm fine, OKAY!!!"

on her was home
she thought about that guy
the pain in her heart
and the tear in her eye.

she refused to talk to him
she couldn't face the pain
couldn't look at him
and couldn't say his name.

he tried to talk to her
tried to ask why
but she wouldn't listen
she just passed him by.

she couldn't ignore him forever
without him she'd die
the next day when she saw him
she simply said, "hi."

day by day
their talks grew longer
minute by minute
their love grew stronger.

she loved him
and he loved her too
but that was a secret
that nobody knew.

all this time they were friends
but not anything more
without his love
then what was she living for.

she decided it was time
to finally be true
the next day when she saw him
she would say, "i love you!"

that night she was getting ready
figuring out what to say
cuz she was going to tell him
when she saw him the next day.

she was so excited
that she didn't know what to do
to get her mind off him
she turned to the channel 4 news.

the girl on t.v. announced,
"a wreck on I-85
it was a fatal accident
a teenage guy dies."

she looked up at the TV
to she the picture of the guy
it was her true love
that had died that night.

she should have told him
she waited too long
now he is dead
and forever gone.

if you love someone
don't make them wait
tell them you love them
before its too late.

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  • 16 years ago

    by MyMuse

    You know this poem brought tears to my eys!!! it was truly amazing!!! IT WASNT TOO LONG!!! It was like a short story from one of those books with many stories in it. please dont EVER stop...you are amazing, you make it sound so simple =]!! it sounds like a poem i wrote a while back hmm we have the same ideas ahaha...but AWESOME JOB!!!!

    added to my fave list too =D

    CourtneyxHolland
    6543577586596894585489485496789573985793/5 Cx

  • 17 years ago

    by BECLiKEW0AHH

    Aw. Thats so sad.
    It made me get tingles reading the last bit, Thats so heartbreaking.

    EXCELLENT POEM! I felt every little bit of it.
    3rd stanza, 1st line, before is spelt wrong.

    Well deserved 5/5.
    Great work.
    Bec.x

  • 17 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    This was a sweet poem. Pretty sad and the emotion was there, which I liked. What I don't like, however, is that you use practically no punctuation. Your readers won't know when to stop if you don't use punctuation. You also didn't capitalise where you should have, and you should use apostrophes when needed (e.g. when writing she's instead of "shes".)

    Overall it was a sweet write. I enjoyed it.

  • 17 years ago

    by ThatPerson

    Umm,Hun-The poem might have been kinda long,but it was worth reading-REALLY,REALLY GOOD ;) 5/5 -Ria

  • 17 years ago

    by Bloodstained

    Wow, that was amazing. all the emotion put into it made it even better.

    100% 5/5.

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