by Treal
I loved it and it was not too long |
by malina
It wasnt too long....i loved it...big fan of yours...waiting for more^_^ |
Aww this poem had me in tears!! its so sad but true!! i loved it 5/5 |
by Yasmin
Wow! i really like your poem! it's really good!!!! I know how that girl feels like... hehe well except the fact that that guy in my life is still alive but he doesnt love me back... so yeah, i guess we're even. =) |
by Mandy
Hey!!! i luv tht poem!! its sooo suh weet!!! i cried...well not really!! well ily!! can't wait to see you!! keep writing till your hand falls off...okay tht was stupid!! but keep it up! |
Hmm...You just seem to get me on almost every one of your poems. Actually, I am finding it amazing lol. I don't usually like many poems from the same author. Only because sometime they have a good day, and sometimes a bad. It changes with everyone. But you seem to hold my attention throughout all of your poems. |
Work on the capitilization, but other than that, it is a very nice story. |
by isabel
Absolutely wonderful... |
Man i really love this poem...it is deep and secret....keep writting more and i will comment more later....5/5 |
by Sara
Day by day |
by Daisha
That is a great poem. It sounds a lot like my friend and me. You are a very talented writer, keep up the good work! =] |
by Sydney
*Sigh** oh my gosh that was amazing. I loved it. My heart flipped when he died. gave me such a wave of emotion, which is a good thing. absolutly amazing! i gave it a 5 |
by Viola
Aww this poem really brings out a great message..and it's very touching and truthful..i absolutely love it !! Good Job =] |
by Im not broken anymore
OMG!! This is very good.. Its so sad if that happened im so sorry but this is amazing! I love it! 5/5.... Keep it up you got mad talent.. |
by Brittany
This is really well written and i can feel the emotion you put into it, its really good! :) |
by Lets Keep it A Surprise
Oh My God..I loved it...it nearly made me cry. Well not literally but i felt my throat choke up lol |
I really love this poem i was on the verge of tears at the end this was very well writtin. |
by uwouldntno
I am speachless...this is a beautiful poem...don't EVER quit writing YOU ARE TERRFIC |
by Tricky Daze
It was so cool..but i will help you with some points to make it perfect |
by N M Lambert
Such a good msg to get across and a really well written poem x |