Sam
Excellent job! I really loved this :)

My love,
My love,
Be the death of me,

The tears they fall,
Between our hands,
Holding on (to a love that's gone)

Touch this light,
Of broken hope and sacrifice,

This part really touched me.
Take Care Cindy

This is indeed a very strong one, loved the way it expressed ur sadness...great write indeed

all the best and take care

The tears they fall,
Between our hands,
Holding on (to a love that's gone)

awwwwwwwww gr8 feelings
and gr8 work take care