Hey, I like this poem it showed clear emotion and im sure many people can relate to it. I liked the flow and the rhyme inside the poem, it works well. I like the fact you compare love to the drug. It is really effective. I liekd the ending, i htought it concluded the poem brilliantly. The style of the poem was good. i really enjoyed reading it. Keep writing! xx |
by alyssa
Oh my god. |
by alyssa
Oh my god. |
by Rach
Wow, such a good poem. so much passion and emotion put into it, cant wait to read more of your stuff. |
Wow i love this poem it is great and i love the ryms 5/5 |
by Unknown
Iight Now that was great poem!! 5/5 |
by xx
Whoa. Awesome poem(: That was well written. YOU are a great writer. |
Wow |