I liked this, ,I enjoyed the theme and the questioning of today's faults and moral values of what's wrong, what's right. i liked it because it reminds me of a stream of thoughts running through a person's mind as they're contemplating life, and WHY something's wrong/right.

here though i found the rythm a little off and the plural changes to singular in "to think and have thoughts.
And the thought of it pains,
How easily our mind rots."
i don't know if that really bothers you just thought I'd point it out

i really liked this stanza,
"Who decides the good and the evil?
Who decides customs?...i won't be tricked"
Good read, I really enjoyed it