Gem,

I love this style. Have wrote a few Octava Rimas, myself, and I must say, you pulled this form off very well. Beautifully done.

Always,
Jeannie

Gem
I really loved this. So much love and passion :)

Those lips of an angel now kiss me with care
And then we begin and it just feels so right
You've shown me that there's no need to be scared
I look deep in your eyes and hold you so tight
Then my body feels like it's floating on air
And I've reached a place where my heart takes flight
We lay close together, bodies intertwined
Those lips of angel get me every time

Loved this stanza.
Take care love Cindy

That is such a beautiful poem! The rhythem flowed very wonderfully. You had such a great use of words. Great job! God Bless 5/5
<3Tayyy

This was so amazingly written. You really have special talent.
I loved it.

Lips of an angel, well brings back memories lol ok i'll stop there lol a beautifully amazing poem Gem god love ya :)) 99/5

O m g! i loved this poem. the words the lines everythng. hey download this song: lips of an angel - hinder its the best song i thought of it when i read the title. neway great poem!! keep em coming xx

Really nicely done!! Congratulations on pulling off the style! Great attention holder...

Sammib

Congrats on placing in rachel's contest....nicely done...you deserve it!