I got a shiver reading this one...could actually visualize as I read. Love the last stanza.

Never seen you write a dark piece before. I likes.

What a crazy poem! WHEEEWW!!! I'm impressed!!! VERY NICE!!!!!! WOOHOO!!!! So dark and evil!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!

So she popped off a title and you wrote? I WANNA PLAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Awesome stuff!

Man that sure did have some imagery alright.

Taken in by words with great rhythm and rhyme that
creates an excellent visual has no doubt made me the next victim. Job well done and Write On,
Bogie

Oh wow, so haunting... The flow to this was fabulous and you perfectly chose your words.

"eyes a tantalizing deep blue
a slight crook to her slender nose
she hunts silently for her next victim
craving that succulent juicy flow"
^^^My favorite stanza! Very nicely done!