She couldn't take any more..

by sugarfacex   Mar 13, 2007


Tear after tear silently fell,
Crimson blood slid down the church bell.
The bitterness on their faces was easily seen,
The chilling death of a teenage girl had slowly come and been.

Not one of them knew what she'd been through,
Nowhere to go...nothing to do.
Just sat enclosed in her room all alone,
This is why nobody ever saw her whines or moans.

The black horse drawn carriage finally arrived,
From then her life had been deprived.
For her limp body had been laid to rest,
Surely this was for the ultimate best.

Nobody saw her pain and tears,
Nobody was around to see her deadly fears.
Noone saw her use that bloodied knife,
To get rid of the anger and deep strife.

Her so called family laid pain upon her soul,
Making her dig deeper into a depressing hole.
Barracaded in her own room,
Wishing the torture would end very soon.

But now her life has finally gone,
All the agony now has now been done.
But her family don't care thry just forget,
Leaving closest friends anxious and upset.

She took her own life and ended the pain.
Now it can't happen once again.
She now is in peace and laid down to rest,
Everything done was for her own best.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jezzika

    I love this poem... Great job!!! If i could rate it a million times I surely would! 5/5!!! LOVED IT!

    Love ya girly!

    @!Jezzika!@

  • 17 years ago

    by firexdancer

    This is so sad, the emotion flows perfectly and it is so well described that you can feel the pain of the girl.
    5/5
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