Comments : She couldn't take any more..

  • 17 years ago

    by firexdancer

    This is so sad, the emotion flows perfectly and it is so well described that you can feel the pain of the girl.
    5/5
    luv gabriella

  • 17 years ago

    by Jezzika

    I love this poem... Great job!!! If i could rate it a million times I surely would! 5/5!!! LOVED IT!

    Love ya girly!

    @!Jezzika!@