Its not my fault

by tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup   Mar 13, 2007


It's not my fault

I tried to tell you I still cared
I tried to tell you that I was scared

It's not my fault you left me
With a broken heart in your SUV
You took that step to end it all
I found you blood after all

I tried to tell you I still cared
I tried to tell you that I was scared

You took those pills on your own
Although you were scared, you still had that tone
You told me once and for all to leave you alone
You didn't want me around
You didn't care

I tried to tell you I still cared
I tried to tell you that I was scared

I love you and always will
Even the day that you took those pills
I don't know what else to say...

I tried to tell you I still cared
I tried to tell you that I was scared

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  • 17 years ago

    by Darien

    This poem was alright. I didn't like the rhymes, because 'cared' and 'scared' where just one letter off. Rhyming 'me' and 'SUV', was different, but it really didn't benefit this poem in anyway.

    "I found you blood after all"
    I think you meant to write 'your' instead of 'you'.

    It was alright. Had some good emotions in it.

  • 17 years ago

    by Independence Forever

    I say shoot him. but hey people don't listen to me cuz i believe in little elves bent on taking over the world with the santa hitch. but anyway good poem

    your servant:
    david

  • 17 years ago

    by in.need.of.a.lucky.charm

    Aw. this gave me the shivers, it was great, the repetion of "I tried to tell you I stil cared, I tried to tell you that I was scared" really emphasized your feelings. great piece.
    Much Love And Many Kisses, Bex.

  • 17 years ago

    by firexdancer

    This is beautiful, but too sad!
    it flowed perfectly together,
    luv gabriella 5/5

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