Before I Give In

by rocker666chick   Mar 13, 2007


You don't believe me,
you think I lie?
I am telling the truth,
You don't understand me, why?
Its happened more than once,
It happened more than twice.
Still you don't believe me.
You don't understand I don't have much time,
my time is divided by this line.
You think I am okay but I am actually not,
I can't take it much more,
My clothes are all torn,
not because of me.
I don't want to be here I want to leave,
I only have a home in my hopelessly dreams.
I gotta find a way out,
I gotta find a way to go.
But please help me before I give in.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Mat

    I can feel your sadness is this one, how you can only escape through your dreams that part really got to me i like it

  • 17 years ago

    by The Sky is Falling

    This poem is different, but Iliked it. I'm hoping you're not writing out of truth. But other then that great job and keep it up 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Fear2love

    Can you tell me wat this poem about, because i like it but dont understand

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany C

    It was an ok poem. The flow was a little off and it would have been better if it was longer. I gave it a 4/5.

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