Be My Endless Love [Acrostic]

I prefered the other acrostic to be honest.
Although this was good, I felt some of the wording could have been more creative. Also, the flow was off in places, but in an acrostic poem I know it's hard to keep it fluent. I know you can do it though, as you did it in your other one.
"Enduring every bump that crosses over our path" is a bit hmm confusing.
I beleive the idea you're trying to portray is to hinder or obstruct the path, rather than cross over...maybe you could take another look at that line?
Thanks for sharing.

NOTICE PEOPLE:

yen2 /yɛn/ Pronunciation Key - Show Spelled Pronunciation[yen] Pronunciation Key - Show IPA Pronunciation, noun, verb, yenned, yen·ning. Informal.
–noun
1. a desire or craving: I had a yen for apple pie.
–verb (used without object)
2. to have a craving; yearn.

YENNING ISSS A WORD! :]

Again, don't use &, it stops the flow.

Yenning = yearning???? i believe that was a mispelling unless there is a word i don't know.

through each = inside each???? makes it seem better, but it is also fine how you say it..

there day & night = there BOTH day and night ???? sounds a little better for the flow.

that crosses over our path = dear, that makes absolutely no sense lol! I know i'm being critical but since when do bumps cross over US?? Don't we cross over the bumps?

View; so amazing, so perfect, and so flawless = view:

never? = dear, what's up with the question mark ?

lol! Great poem though. I'll have to read it again.

5/5
~Steve.

This poem had a lot of emotion. I think all of your poems are amazzzing but I have to say this is probably one of my favorites.

5/5! <3 Keep up the amazing work!

Beautifully done!!
5/5

God bless u