Promises [Acrostic]

God, it was only a week or even days ago I felt that same way. Glad I'm out of that! Anyway, wonderful poem, I was definately about to relate to it. Keep up the great writing! ;)

Good use of the form. Most people make the mistake of trying to rhyme acrostics, and when you have the starting letter restriction already, it only makes it harder on yourself to add another restriction.
I think on the first line "ripped and torn" is a pleonasm. You only need to use one of those words, in which case you may want to substitute a word there.
I liked your use of language (other than that) and the sarcastic
ending line was potent, giving the reader a strong sense of emotion to end the poem with.
Thanks for sharing.

Satisfied; [I bet you are]

i love that line.
Perfect ending

Beautiful short poem, a little forced but that is something that you rarely can help in an acrostic. You did a well job and i totally LOVE the last line... just... awesome..

10/5 (5/1 on the last line!)

~Stephen White

When i read this, i really thought i might cry... its like you are reading right into my heart and writing it down on paper. this is an amazing poem i love it

Awww this was great! nice big descriptive words! great job I loved it