Wow! This poem is really powerful. If I could rate it a million times I surely would! 5/5 all the way. I love this poem and if you saw me read it you would have seen a tear fall from my eyes. Cause everyday my soul crys, from livin' these lies.

Great job!

@!Jezzika!@

Great poem!

Omg...is this a true poem? if it is then i am so sorry! this is a really great poem though! your flow and rhyming was great...i love it 5/5

xoxo becca

Omg I am soooo sorry this was tremendously sad oh wow nice poem! the expression and words and just everything was amazing!

The autrocities children are told in order to have a secret kept. For those who have lived with the 'dirty little secrets' This poem may convince them to open their mouths and tell. I never really understood the number of children that are afflicted with this, until I became a volunteer at a children's care unit. I have since seen and heard the horrible things children have to live with and how they have suffered because of it. It trully breaks my heart. You have written this so wonderfully. Maybe we can all find a healing comfort in your words.

Thanks for sharing.

Always,
Jeannie

Excellent poem powerful u may want to enter this poem in my contest "Untold storys"

This was an amzing poem, the story you told was so powerful and meaningful. It was truly so full of emotion. Very well written, It was quite the inspiration. Great job.

5/5

Daniella James

Very good job on this one ,As I lay alone and broken crying in my bed,
Memories of it haunt me and terrorize my head,
I know where you coming from there ,I'm sorry , God bless you,,,,Tracy~~~~5/5~~~~~~

Kay
How these things haunt and follow us into adulthood.....I was 30 years old before I told. Hopefully you can heal now from this sick thing that was done to you. I have you in my prayers my dear friend.
Love you
Cindy