Comments : I will one day be.

  • 17 years ago

    by sugarfacex

    I like this...is the person in the poem that told you that in the end theres summat to gain me? cos i do remember saying summat like that to yu much luff lv ya huni xx

  • 17 years ago

    by homebound

    I can tell a lot of deep thoughts were put into this poem! Very well written and makes the reader have to think through it! Great job and keep it up! 5/5
    ~Love and Trust~

  • 17 years ago

    by Aimee

    Oh my god, that one was really good, I like the bit where it said but someone told me that in the end there would be somthing to gain, or along those lines, because its true. Keep up your poetry is really good. [: