Beautiful

Beautiful poem u got it bad for someone who is no longer there for u I have been there too.

Wow, i would have to say this poem really made me think about things..i lost someone too, as you could probably tell from my poem..my mom died a couple years ago..i know exactly how you feel..this poem is great!

Thanx...for your comments I really appreciate it...If you guys ever want me to read/vote/comment on your poems just tell me and I will...Also, I would love to hear from you so if you ever need to talk or just want a friend...I'm a great listener and I'll try to help you in any way i can...

"Losing Yourself"

OMFG m'dear, and you said I'm a good writer. This poem is just incredibly touching... it's awesome. It made me read it from start to end, with the gut/heart wrenching feeling in my stomach... It made me relate to it and it was just incredible.

I love this poem.

5/5
~Stephen White

Omg i love this amazing keep it up 5/5

ALEX

Good gawshhhh.
lol.
im speechless.
this is suchhh a beautiful write. so much emotion was put into it. it's absolutely stunning. keep writing. im anxious to see more of ur work.

.5/5.
great job&&keep it up.
much love,
mac.<3
[.just.another.silly.teenage.girl.]

Was'nt it Shakespeare who said it is better to have loved and lost than not have loved at all. Out of the emptiness of losing someone you loved, you've given us a gift, a poem that speaks truth. You are seamlessly connected to your feelings and the imagery in your poem connects me with them also. Thank you.

Th words were amazing. it's so sad and full with ur feeling and emotions. the flow was great. i love it. and i can so relate to this but we have to hold on to the ppl around us. be strong. i can so relate to this. i love it.

TaKe CaRe,
Frenchy