Beauty of Nature(Haiku)
by Rahl The Layman Lord Mar 13, 2007
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Sun Sweeping the hills |
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17 years ago
by Teria
'yon' < loved it.
Wow.
Haven't seen a haiku with like, any older english words.
Amazingly beautiful poem.
Loved how it was like tiny [usually i hate these] but you did a great job with it. Oh, finish my sentence. Loved how it was tiny, yet captivating in a way. :] -
17 years ago
by x Mo x
That was a beautiful haiku, I havent read one in a long time. I like the description of nature, its so short and so filled at the same time. Great job.
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17 years ago
by Nyx
Hey sisttta ..nice all u need is a picture
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17 years ago
...lovely...
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17 years ago
by silvershoes
That is actually quite beautiful Jason. Though you encapture nature, this is not a typical haiku. You incorporate Old English! You would do that, wouldn't you?
5.5
