That is actually quite beautiful Jason. Though you encapture nature, this is not a typical haiku. You incorporate Old English! You would do that, wouldn't you?

5.5

...lovely...

Hey sisttta ..nice all u need is a picture

That was a beautiful haiku, I havent read one in a long time. I like the description of nature, its so short and so filled at the same time. Great job.

'yon' < loved it.
Wow.
Haven't seen a haiku with like, any older english words.
Amazingly beautiful poem.
Loved how it was like tiny [usually i hate these] but you did a great job with it. Oh, finish my sentence. Loved how it was tiny, yet captivating in a way. :]