This poem brought tears to my eyes because i have been there, "You carry my heart & for that I fret |
by Darien
Brreeezzyyy!!!! This was such a sad poem, and I can definitely relate to the emotions in this poem. The love-hate confusion. There are some very powerful lines in this poem and I definitely feel the same way. The regret of meeting that person, the forgiving them, the wanting them to change. Wow, this was really well done hun. I really hope you're doing ok. I know I'm doing a lot better, but I just can't write love poems the way I use to. That's how hurt I was. *sigh* hopefully a new inspiration comes my way! lol Take care hun! Love ya! |
by Allison
Like I said before. Your writing style is very unique. You write excellent poems. |
by Kaila
Awww this was so sad I can totally relate to it though you used nice words I loved it! |
This poem has a lot of emotion in it.... the flow is good and the wording is good. all together it is a good poem |
Me & call = please begin writing out and... just a suggestion. |