I like alut

There is some problem with the length of lines but so sad and sorrowful and as another thing symbols in poem just tried to make this poem bad but they couldn't
Good job
Take care
Laura

I thought this poem was good...it had a lot of nice discriptive words and your imagery was grand I got kinda lost in the middle though but oh well it was a good poem anyways nice job!

Yo man I liked this poem it's sad an emotional which is what I want a sad poem to be....
YOu did an excelent job but it was a bit long though..
However you broke it up into nice stanzas so it was very easy to read =D

Never the less great job and keep writing ! =D

WOW I am really impressed with this poem you did an excelent job