Wow! i absolutely loved this poem it shows the beautiful mercy of Jesus and his incredible sacrice for us.

I am lost in the shadows of my sin
Such an enteric paradox
That when I lose
I win

i really love this line. its so deep and powerful and it really struck me. do you mind if i used the "when i lose, i win" idea in one of my own poems that i am writing at the moment?

a beautiful poem! definately keep it up! loved it 5/5! god bless! xxx