It's really good, the emotions just pulse in the poem, your poems are so intense, and you can feel them so well.
5/5
luv gabriella

And yes i am 13, (you aren't blind)
thx luv gabriella

I love this poem. its really great. the wording, the stanzas! but id have to say that stanza 9 is my favorite stanza though. GREAT

Aw. this was so sad ;[ Made me all teary.
It flowed nicely & had TONS of emotions in it. I think that some of the rhymes seemed a bit forced , like the one about the 'cast'. but that's just me.

Other than that, nicely done, dear.

Bri [x]

This is another greatly written poem by one of the greatest poet here. your poems are so great and they take me to aa different world as i can relate to them. my dear, you are really talented and one of those poet who i really enjoy reading. keep it up.

Wow lucy this is a great poem you could have enter it in the Untold stories contest it would have fit right into it. but reading it now is so great cause I can just take the poem and the feelings in a friend of mine is having this kind of issue lately this poem reminded me of her

Very good
I can never seem to find anything wrong with your poems
Ever!!
Which is very impressive to me
You by far are going on my favorites list
Your great