Wow that was amazing dave. I love it that is one of my favorite poems of your.

Keep at the really good work you are really talented.

I really like this poem, well done 5/5

A great poem.
How you divised it with the colours..very good. A pleasure to read it.
Keep it up

I love this so much. The concept of it is great. The main thing that stood out for me in this poem was the flow, every stanza flowed so well. The rhyming was natural and it's all just so true. A nice ending too. You know i'm a big fan of your poetry, always will be.
5/5

Tammie

Your poems are so beautiful
they make the reader happy, it has perfect flow, and its just wonderful
5/5 forevor
luv gabriella

I really enjoyed this! As I was reading through it I was thinking, "I wonder if he would use orange." hehe. Great poem, I loved your outlook on each color.

DUDE! you rock at writing!!!! u could totally be a professional!! :)

Awwww that was cool! I loved the creativity with the colors and how they symbolized different things! It was very original and unique! you did a great job! 5/5 love always your pal Kaila

Wow... that was awesome!! The flow was just brilliant, the idea behind it is awesome, how you put such a complex thought into something so simple... simply amazing!! Great write, defintely an even better read!! 5/5
Much Love,
.:Danielle:.

I love this poem so much. A very creative write. I like how you used the colours to describe those elements of life. A very brilliant write here. Never stop writing!! 5/5

` Liz

- P.S. thanks much for your comments. =]

What a way to put a new meaning to simple colors. A nice stray from the color of trees, grass, and skys.

--Sher

Wow, beautiful poem. I like it.

Very Creative. Haha i wish i could pick my colors.

It was nice but i must say it was a little bleak

Wow! your poems are absolutely amazing 5/5

Wow how gracefully you have described the functions of different colours. Very unique piece with creative imagination.

5/5 Of course

With love
Fsams