This touches on the feelings of being cronically ill, closer than anything I have ever read. Excellent job on this write.

Fevered delusions endured, such a painful plight.
Onward I march toward my premature night.

I am really amazed with this, it shows you have been around this for sometime. 5/5

Great write, i enjoyed the poem and the passion.

Very well written.....heartfelt look into the world of the chronically ill....your passion for writing speaks! All the best, Debbie

My time soon over, such a bitter end.
I weep alone now, gone my family and friends

Such painful but yet reality. I love the way you potray your feelings through a poem.

keep writing

all the best and take care

Loved this poem, its very well written and I can relate 2 this in a way.. Ur poem really touches the heart of the reader. 5/5 keep up the good work. ur a great writter

P.S- thanx 4 commenting and rating my poem, It means a lot.

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