Comments : Today

  • 17 years ago

    by Savanna Elaine

    I really like this poem hon, it reminds me of how i feel with that one special guy~! Great job~!

  • 17 years ago

    by Romantic Lover

    Today you made me love you more
    Without even having to try
    Everytime I think of you
    Let out a contented sigh.

    This is how I feel also with the one I love.

  • 17 years ago

    by Chrissie

    This was a awesome poem. You are a great writer. I love the way you have written it..like..'today you did this'..'today you did that'..its so sweet

  • 17 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    This is a really nice poem. Again, on the simple side, but I liked it more than your other one.

    I liked the ending a lot, because it's sort of negative; as if the persona does not have the person spoken of, they only hope for it. Yet throughout the rest of the poem, it's positive. It constantly expresses thoughts of love, and that's always a beautiful thing to read.

    Nice write.

  • 17 years ago

    by Poeta

    Oh my gosh! This is the most perfect poem in all of poetry concerning a love life! Tis the most beautifully simple, yet soo wonderful!
    100/5!! ...OK, 5/5 (but if I could, I'd put 100/5!!) ^.^

    Heartz!