Mmmmm` . I didn`t really get what the poem was about , in all honesty . Or maybe I`m just really ... uninsightful o_O I do reccommend editing it . BUT from what you have so far, I think it sounds good .

if you continue to believe
forget it all
and leave

The last line in that stanza seemed too short to me and kind of threw off the flow that was starting . BUt keep working at it . What you have so far is good . Just make it more clear about what you`re trying to write .
..__MiNDYY

Whats there to need help on it. i so totally loved it! it was magical. the words you used made up small short sentences but very well done. wouldn't want it any other way.

5/5 david

I think this one is great.
i love it.
-deadbeatromance

I don't know why you would need help I thought this poem made perfect sense I loved it a lot!

Ok so i like this one. but idk so much about the last stanza. its a lot different then the others and it doesnt quite make sense to me

Heey, awesome job girl :D
When I read the title I was like " Oh yeah! " :D
It's perfect. :D I loved it. You like show that you'll be just fine by your own, and you don't need that guy - or whoever you mean - by your side. That's what I call a good attitude!
My favorite part was:
If there's nothing you can say
just shut up
and walk away
I don't think you need help with it!
It's just perfect!

Best of wishes!
Take care

I like how this poem is so "in your face". Great job.

[tragic]