If I die tonight

by firexdancer   Mar 14, 2007


If i die tonight
i just want you to know
that when i turned off the light
i wasn't sad to go
if i die tonight
don't be sad to see me leave
cause i didn't put up a fight
you don't need to grieve
if i die tonight
don't cry over my bed
just let me take flight
or they might take you instead
if i die tonight
don't worry about my soul
cause when it all goes white
i'll get back what they had stole
if i die tonight
watch me smile in my sleep
there's no getting me back into sight
cause i've already gone too deep.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Kayla

    Another wonderful poem Gab! This one definitely grabbed my attention and I just couldn't stop reading it. I can relate to it in so many ways.. this is actually the way I feel most of the time. Great job girl, keep up the good work!! <3

    ~Loveless Nights~

  • 17 years ago

    by AllHailTheHeartbreaker

    Strong piece. Definitely a 5/5. You're a lovely writer, keep it up!

    [tragic]

  • 17 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    I really liked this. The rhyming was spot on. An incredibly bleak image was created, yet I enjoyed reading it a lot. Your words really brought me into the poem, as if I was there.

    Good job.

  • 17 years ago

    by honeypot

    You write about things that I think about, and i'm sure everyone who reads your work can take something from it.
    Your fantastic, stay strong sweetheart xx

  • 17 years ago

    by The Lonely Rose

    Wow another good poem...i can feel ur emotion all over..very good =)

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