First lines my favorite! reminds me of my friends lol.

i've noticed you've been doing alot of short styles. new twist on your poetry, i like it alot. its like saying so much more in so fewer words. i was never very good at it since many of my poems have choruses almost like songs, but i might try it more sometime:)

Very nice... Love the title, awesome wording!

You have a interesting style going lately... its very different for you but very good