Awww dats reli sweet huni, a reli lovely poem well done. Mazie.X

A beautifull poem :) sometime despite the past one has to just trust the new person perhaps it will be different :) 5/5

Aw. That's so beautiful. You did a wonderful job on this. It flowed well & was just.. breathtaking :]

Bri [x]

Oooooh! I liked this one a lot. There were a lot of good lines throughout and that is always nice and fresh when just about every two lines and line really stands out. Two of my Favs were, "Not every person out there walks out on the dance." And "Misled by former users with a diary full of pain"...very nice descriptions and visuals. Great job Charisma!
~Midnight Sun

"Cold hearts had hurt me, left me in a world of blue
I would barely be together if not for the heart of you."

I loved those lines. Great job on this one.

I loved the part about the dance. One of my favourite metaphors for love.
Excellent flow thoughout as ususal m'dear
Well done indeed, it was a beautiful piece
5/5
*Gem*

Girl... this one touched my heart! I love the way it flowed, I could feel the underlying story of mistrust and rebuilding love again throughout the peice, well done. And also a thanks for your comment on mine. :) Yes, I also hope to see the little red numbers too..LOL they really mean so much.
tom

This was so beautiful...my favourite part was the ''diar full of pain.''
I enjoyed the opening and the first few lines had me hooked.
I thought the ending was beautifully writen and such a great way to wrap up.