by Michelle
I like how you portrayed realization through rejection, and being hurt. I thought the vocabulary and rhyme scheme was a bit simple, but you still described the emotion and point of the poem quite well. I liked the lines in the first stanza, |
by azii
So beautifully written! Good job. I love this one. And most of all I liked these last lines: |
by Curry
I love this poem! amazing writing. i gave it 5/5 |
by Kaila
Oh wow nice emotion i think you couldve been a wee more descriptive but it was very very emotional all on it;s own the right guy will come i know it! |
by Teria
GOODNESS. |
This poem was AMAZING. |