This was so beautiful!
That last stanza was just *sigh* it made me feel mushy inside haha.
beautifully written, as always.

Great job on this piece I really liked this stanza.

And I dare you to try
Counting the stars out of touch
The brightest to say "I Love You"
And millions others reminding how much

Excellent.
Take Care cindy

And I dare you to try
Counting the stars out of touch
The brightest to say "I Love You"
And millions others reminding how much
And if she ends up there tomorrow
Her feelings will never change
Simply close your eyes
She'll forever be in close range

this is certainly the best stanzas i have read in a long time...this is a superb poem for sure

keep writing

all the best and take care

Darlin, I love this poem. I love knowing that the passion is so strong that it will always be there even as two lovers are apart. It reminded me of a quote I heard.." if every time I thougth of you I could pull a star from the sky surely this evening we would have a starless night." It would be nice to be loved this deeply. Keep up the good work.. i love your poems..we can have a mutual poetic love affair! ~LOL~ Sweetheart you soooo outshine me! tom