by debbylyn
The wonderous glow of the first breath of Spring....so glad it has touched you Cindy.....beautiful sentiments....Love, Debbie |
by ben thompson
We all take many of these simple things for granted. I too take many of our "simple pleasures" for granted. this is a great write from someone who really knows. 5/5 from me. best wishes. keep up hope cindy |
by Lithium
I just had a moment of pure bliss as if a breath of fresh air just reached my lungs, your work is exquisite continue to write because u r an inspiration. |
The moment you shared this with me...i knew it would inspire you for another poem and here it is..so wonderfully written. It may seem such a small thing..opening a window...but i know what it means to you and a smile on your face means a lot to me. Am glad that u decided to breathe with nature again. |
Aww, the wonders of Spring has bitten. A magical write. Loved the imagery, dear friend. Sometimes we do take this wonderful offering of Mother Nature for granted. Loved it. |
Spring is a refreshing time of year and its great to be outdoors. What a beautiful poem. |
by Gem
"My heart fills with joy again |
by Cathy
This is a beautiful poem Cindy! |
by chavii
Cindy,its a beautiful poem .It reminds us how we take so beautiful yet simple pleasures for granted in life. |
by Boy
Its very nicely written.. i lovd you all poem and the simple pleausre. tht was gr8.. but i think if tht person is not wiht us to who we love then this world seems so empty. anyways. i liked ur poem take care |
by David
I loved the ending the most. the way you wrote this was excellent. a 5 from me! bravo! |
I like this. Excellent work Cindy!!! |
by Sweetest.Sin
It's very good. |
by Jessie
This poem is simply amazing, so elegant and simple, yet so powerful. It reminds me of the way I feel when I sit outside on a nice day, sometimes. :D |
by Barry
Life is so beautiful...beyond words |