I loved this one about Little Miss. Perfect right?

This is pretty good, kid. the only suggestion i can give you is that it sounds slightly like a little kids poem. im not saying that all of yours do, but try to use bigger words. if you need help with rhyming (i use this a lot because im awful at rhyming) you can use rhymezone.com! :D !!! I hope you keep writing, im looking forward to seeing your poems progress as you get older. keep it up, kid!