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Hey again this is a good poem. I likedthe structure of it, it worked really well. Im just wondering thought, why is this in the sad poem section? It seems to be more uplifting then sad. I liekd the questions your asking in this poem. It was a really good read, to improve i suggest you work on punctuation. It helps the reader, read it how you want it to be read. keep it up! xx