Strong poem; 5/5

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Girl thats really good...

Strong and powerful poem you have hear. It was agin quite sad and touched the reader. Again i thought you used the word "feel" too much, maybe go on thesaurus.com and find soem different words you could use? But i dont know maybe its just me yet again. Anyways i hope your ok and if you need to talk im hear k? PM me anytime. Anywyas good poem, keep it up! xx

Wonderfull poem, I can strongly relate. Thanks for the comment, you say that my friends are luck to have me? Well I could disagree with you there, I have not had the best experiences with friends throughout the years, and I never really knew this ( well more of accepted ) till a few days ago when my best friend, and girl friend helped me see that. I am glad you think that I am a good poet, even though I don't really care what others think, I still like positive feedback. This poem kinda reminds me of how i feel with my friends. Hope to stay in touch, alex.

Wow that is a really nicely writen poem!

Ok so yea i can really really relate to this one. i like reading your poems cuz with some its like you took the feelings out of me and put them into words. haha great job.