Please save me

Very emotional..remember that your never alone hun xxx im always here for ya and you no you can always talk to me xxx lym tc xxxxx

Full of emotion but remember ou are not alone...x

Very emotional and heartfelt read. It really touches the reader, as we want to help "svae you". The confusion and your scream for help is displayed really well. I love that about this poem. The repitition of "Save me" is really quite effective in this poem, but i just felt that you used it a little to much... maybe thats just me though. The usage of repition is a major factor in this poem, you repeated words yet you also repeated the idea of asking for help throughtout. A good job, keep it up and thanks for all your comemnts! xx

Greast poem, you could really sense the panick and vulnerability in it. A real heart written piece.
loved it
Keep it up.
I read most of your others as well, given the time i have at the moment i couldnt read them all, but they are all real good.
def 5/5 from me.
-Black night-

=( Dang girl... Thats crazy