This is inspiring and great use of words! 5/5

Wow, i can even hear the beat behind it, really nice mixture of words.

Hey Vino. Thanks alot for your comment. lol I've been having major writers block again, so it was a little forced - but anywho...:P... I like this one. Especially the beginning. I think I find most of your beginnings to be hold your strongest lines. I'm still a fan. :). When do I get to hear you sing these songs though??? :P. Well, I hope you're doing well. Keep up the writing!

I love this one! Reallly niiiiice!
-sarah